for the first ever time

Posted by redthil On 7/18/2009 11:31:00 PM


i don't really want a thermometer
for i can feel the freezing chill
right till my stomach

i don't really want a rain-gauge
for i can quench my thirst
with the dews in my mustache

i don't really want an anemometer
for my two tear drops
never reached my chin

What I really wanted is
for the first ever time
her hand to hold mine.....

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6 comments

  1. wow.. romantic poem, eh?Congratulations!! didn't know you were into poetry too..:)

    Posted on Sunday, July 19, 2009 12:04:00 AM

     
  2. redthil Said,

    first thanks.. into poetry, if it seems like one... i call them, "raves of impatient mind"...

    Posted on Sunday, July 19, 2009 12:13:00 AM

     
  3. Your labels are always lovely.

    Posted on Sunday, July 19, 2009 9:42:00 PM

     
  4. redthil Said,

    mikka nandri hai Abirami...

    Posted on Sunday, July 19, 2009 10:47:00 PM

     
  5. Sandhya Said,

    hey...nice poem..who is the inspiration for such a romantic poem?

    Posted on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 5:27:00 AM

     
  6. redthil Said,

    inspiration.. my DREAMGIRL.. :) a Dream, which will never come true...

    Posted on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 8:50:00 PM

     
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